If you use deveiantART then it’s easier for us to comment on your writing… it’s up to you. :) What ever’s easier for you to remember. I like dA better because you can keep feedback specific… rather than having everyone’s feedback and writing crammed together in one thread.
I found the differences between your poems interesting – how they had similar feel and yet used very differnt rhyme patterns.
I recently finished the first draft of a short film I’m working on, our director got impatient and started filming before I could get the second draft done (who can blame him, it is a student project), so I’m doing edits and re-writes as we film. So far so good, it was a really trying and fun process. I can’t wait to do this more often.